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author | jsm <jsm@NetBSD.org> | 2000-09-10 10:51:16 +0000 |
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committer | jsm <jsm@NetBSD.org> | 2000-09-10 10:51:16 +0000 |
commit | c8f75ed90de51b0cc71da2c6c9d5fc42192076f8 (patch) | |
tree | 8e9ce8ed243c180a5187bb3e1009d8205761df0a /battlestar | |
parent | 29a87ab833bc1b9214ec69d8c84421d5529038b7 (diff) | |
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Wording, punctuation and line length improvements. Also adjust test
for killing nonsensical things to fix crash with "kill door". From
OpenBSD.
Diffstat (limited to 'battlestar')
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/com2.c | 8 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/com3.c | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/com4.c | 12 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/com5.c | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/com6.c | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/com7.c | 8 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | battlestar/cypher.c | 6 |
7 files changed, 26 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/battlestar/com2.c b/battlestar/com2.c index f2536ff3..96748eba 100644 --- a/battlestar/com2.c +++ b/battlestar/com2.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: com2.c,v 1.8 1999/07/14 17:42:13 hubertf Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: com2.c,v 1.9 2000/09/10 10:51:16 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)com2.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: com2.c,v 1.8 1999/07/14 17:42:13 hubertf Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: com2.c,v 1.9 2000/09/10 10:51:16 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -239,8 +239,8 @@ murder() break; default: - if (wordtype[wordnumber] != NOUNS) - puts("Kill what?"); + if (wordtype[wordnumber] != OBJECT) + puts("You can't kill that!"); else printf("You can't kill the %s!\n", objsht[wordvalue[wordnumber]]); diff --git a/battlestar/com3.c b/battlestar/com3.c index d508d5e2..774239a5 100644 --- a/battlestar/com3.c +++ b/battlestar/com3.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: com3.c,v 1.7 1998/08/24 00:19:25 hubertf Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: com3.c,v 1.8 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)com3.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: com3.c,v 1.7 1998/08/24 00:19:25 hubertf Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: com3.c,v 1.8 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ shoot() clearbit(location[position].objects, TIMER); setbit(location[position].objects, DEADTIME); } else - puts("What old timer?"); + puts("What old-timer?"); break; case MAN: if (testbit(location[position].objects, MAN)) { diff --git a/battlestar/com4.c b/battlestar/com4.c index addce416..387eb6d2 100644 --- a/battlestar/com4.c +++ b/battlestar/com4.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: com4.c,v 1.8 1999/09/18 19:38:46 jsm Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: com4.c,v 1.9 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)com4.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: com4.c,v 1.8 1999/09/18 19:38:46 jsm Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: com4.c,v 1.9 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -143,9 +143,9 @@ take(from) if (testbit(location[position].objects, AMULET)) { puts("The amulet is warm to the touch, and its beauty catches your breath."); puts("A mist falls over your eyes, but then it is gone. Sounds seem clearer"); - puts("and sharper but far away as if in a dream. The sound of purling water reaches"); - puts("you from afar. The mist falls again, and your heart leaps in horror. The gold"); - puts("freezes your hands and fathomless darkness engulfs your soul."); + puts("and sharper but far away as if in a dream. The sound of purling water"); + puts("reaches you from afar. The mist falls again, and your heart leaps in horror."); + puts("The gold freezes your hands and fathomless darkness engulfs your soul."); } wordtype[wordnumber--] = OBJECT; return (take(from)); @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ take(from) puts("Water droplets like liquid silver bedew her golden skin, but when they part"); puts("from her, they fall as teardrops. She wraps a single cloth around her and"); puts("ties it at the waist. Around her neck hangs a golden amulet."); - puts("She bids you to follow her."); + puts("She bids you to follow her, and walks away."); pleasure++; followgod = ourtime; clearbit(location[position].objects, BATHGOD); diff --git a/battlestar/com5.c b/battlestar/com5.c index 71f8af70..24afa00b 100644 --- a/battlestar/com5.c +++ b/battlestar/com5.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: com5.c,v 1.11 2000/09/08 17:25:31 jsm Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: com5.c,v 1.12 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)com5.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: com5.c,v 1.11 2000/09/08 17:25:31 jsm Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: com5.c,v 1.12 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ kiss() } break; case NATIVE: - puts("The lips are warm and her body robust. She pulls you down to the ground."); + puts("Her lips are warm and her body robust. She pulls you down to the ground."); break; case TIMER: puts("The old man blushes."); diff --git a/battlestar/com6.c b/battlestar/com6.c index 027249d2..5bd9ebdc 100644 --- a/battlestar/com6.c +++ b/battlestar/com6.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: com6.c,v 1.15 1999/09/14 18:08:46 jsm Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: com6.c,v 1.16 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)com6.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: com6.c,v 1.15 1999/09/14 18:08:46 jsm Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: com6.c,v 1.16 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ ride() { if (testbit(location[position].objects, HORSE)) { puts("You climb onto the stallion and kick it in the guts. The stupid steed launches"); - puts("forward through bush and fern. You are thrown and the horse gallups off."); + puts("forward through bush and fern. You are thrown and the horse gallops off."); clearbit(location[position].objects, HORSE); while (!(position = rnd(NUMOFROOMS + 1)) || !OUTSIDE || !beenthere[position] || location[position].flyhere); setbit(location[position].objects, HORSE); diff --git a/battlestar/com7.c b/battlestar/com7.c index 31b4c57e..043de03c 100644 --- a/battlestar/com7.c +++ b/battlestar/com7.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: com7.c,v 1.7 2000/07/23 23:57:23 mycroft Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: com7.c,v 1.8 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)com7.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: com7.c,v 1.7 2000/07/23 23:57:23 mycroft Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: com7.c,v 1.8 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ fighton: break; default: - puts("You don't have a chance, he is too quick."); + puts("You don't have a chance; he is too quick."); break; } @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ fighton: return (0); } puts("He attacks..."); - /* some embellisments */ + /* Some embellishments. */ hurt = rnd(NUMOFINJURIES) - (testbit(inven, SHIELD) != 0) - (testbit(wear, MAIL) != 0) - (testbit(wear, HELM) != 0); hurt += (testbit(wear, AMULET) != 0) + (testbit(wear, MEDALION) != 0) + (testbit(wear, TALISMAN) != 0); hurt = hurt < 0 ? 0 : hurt; diff --git a/battlestar/cypher.c b/battlestar/cypher.c index f2dfc1e8..51330f18 100644 --- a/battlestar/cypher.c +++ b/battlestar/cypher.c @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -/* $NetBSD: cypher.c,v 1.12 2000/09/08 17:25:32 jsm Exp $ */ +/* $NetBSD: cypher.c,v 1.13 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $ */ /* * Copyright (c) 1983, 1993 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ #if 0 static char sccsid[] = "@(#)cypher.c 8.2 (Berkeley) 4/28/95"; #else -__RCSID("$NetBSD: cypher.c,v 1.12 2000/09/08 17:25:32 jsm Exp $"); +__RCSID("$NetBSD: cypher.c,v 1.13 2000/09/10 10:51:17 jsm Exp $"); #endif #endif /* not lint */ @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ cypher() break; case SAVE: - printf("\nSave file name (default %s) ", + printf("\nSave file name (default %s): ", DEFAULT_SAVE_FILE); filename = fgetln(stdin, &filename_len); if (filename_len == 0 |